Wednesday, August 20, 2014

ADDING TENSION to your writing

On Monday, I met with local writers to hear a mini-workshop given by Erin Lindsay McCabe, author of the historical novel I SHALL BE NEAR TO YOU. Her website is HERE, and her book is described as:

An extraordinary novel about a strong-willed woman who disguises herself as a man in order to fight beside her husband, inspired by the letters of a remarkable female soldier who fought in the Civil War.

In her talk, Erin listed ways to increase tension in our writing—some surprising, as I'd never thought about how some of these things relate to tension.

ERIN'S 7 WAYS TO INCREASE TENSION
1. Make a likeable character, one readers will care about. If readers are invested and feel close to a character, every obstacle the character faces will be sensed more keenly, with the interest in their welfare heightened.
2. Make a likeable character, which doesn't mean a wholly "good" character. A wholly good (or evil) character can be flat or stereotypical. Erin described the "good-bad character" and the "bad-good character," one who performs acts of both evil and kindness. These more complex characters amp up tension because they aren't as predictable, and often have conflicting inner desires.
3. The character needs to WANT something. A dream, a goal separate from the action of the story. What's important to the main character? If he/she wants something badly, the roadblocks along the way create more conflict and thus more tension.
4. Make life difficult with confrontation. Don't be too easy on your characters; take them to their limits, their darkest places. Make them experience the worst day of their life. Stretch them and have them make active choices that put them in yet more complex places, full of more difficult choices. Don't give characters what they want!
5. In dialogue, find ways to make characters say No to each other. This wise nugget Erin found in WRITING FICTION by Janet Burroway. If characters are in conflict and at odds with each other, tension is increased. People often don't think the exact same way about issues; show those differences. Make your interchange complicated. Also, make sure the characters aren't saying No to the exact same conflict throughout; explore different angles of that conflict.
6. Pay attention to pacing. When editing, cut scenes that don't further the plot; wandering or slow passages dilute tension. Look for places where your characters aren't talking for a half-page or more. Do you have too much sitting around and thinking? Often you can transform that into dialogue with another character, but be sure to further plot or relationships rather than writing needless talk. Don't have your characters dole out exposition or info dumps: show with actions and blend the details. Also, often tension can be increased by slowing action down. Don't rush important scenes. Explore the emotions and actions (by describing, not Telling) to make the reader FEEL what the character does.
7. Remove filters, phrases such as "she looked" or "I heard" or "he saw." Those words add distance and dilute tension because the writer is reminding the readers they're in someone's head. Just BE in that person's head, and describe the noise or sight without the filter words. Filters also slow scenes down, which again relates to the pacing issue.   

YOUR TURN
Have you ever thought about how character plays a part in tension?
Do you have any other ways you like to add tension to a scene or story?
Do you enjoy historical fiction, such as Erin McCabe's 19th-century Civil War novel?

8 comments:

  1. You're spot on about writing good without being just good all the time...that can be a struggle to flesh out. The remove filters point was well taken. I'm going to go back for a second look at my WIP. :) Raquel Byrnes

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  2. Here's my favorite tool: A simple flaw that seems polar to your char's personality is the best, subtle conflict (tension) that hits the reader without otherwise touching the story's plot.

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  3. Great tips. I need to remember the one about filters. I've seen it before, but I know I'm guilty of them.

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  4. I'm often too mean to my characters, lol. I sometimes have to pull it back a smidge.

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  5. Great advice and list. The remove filters is known as 'Deep POV' and I struggle with it big time! The number 3 is GMC- goal, motivation and conflict.

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  6. Nice tips, Carol. Like Medeia, I need to remember the one about filters. I have a tendency to add them when they are unnecessary.

    BTW: I left an award for you on my blog.

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  7. Great tips, always, but sometimes i use the filters to deliberately slow the pace.

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  8. Great advice! Increasing the tension or danger really improves manuscripts. It's not the easiest thing to do to your characters, but it will help the reader to care more about the characters.

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